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I am not your tomorrow,
Not your crashing ocean waves,
Not your ruby sunset or sapphire swells.

I am not your envy,
Not your cold reflection,
Not your jagged knife or darkened shroud.

I am not your music,
Not your sifted melody,
Not your ivory keys or silver harp strings.

I am not your south,
Not your north,
Not your aging map or glass compass.

I am not your wings,
Not your escape,
Not your trickling hourglass or locked journal.
I'm watching UP right now yay!
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ConvictionbyLarm Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh lovley dear, what kind of poetry goes up and down my head, my fingers, my feelings like wings out of my shoulders and tears roll down the feathers, because your rimes are so softly , so true, this poem is so real and the meaning so valuable, I which I could tell it to those, who want me to be somebody else…
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so, terribly sorry for such a late reply but thank you dearly! And what a lovely poetic comment!
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silvertitan93 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! This is brilliant! =)
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Terribly sorry for such a late response but thank you so much!
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silvertitan93 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha it's fine! Glad to see you back!
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ConnorwithtwoNs Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Literally mouthed "wow!" at the end of every stanza! This is exemplary.
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So sorry for being so late with this reply but thank you! :D
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AvisTheArtistGeek Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good lord, Abigail!
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heyyyy guess what this comment is really late because I'm a dork and haven't been active on here for almost 10 weeks.
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Sjemenka Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is SO good. :D
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